Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket while some others prefer to shop online. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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The way of shopping is rapidly changing since

last

decades. Before 10-15 years it was like retail

shops

in local

market

where we use to go with our parents and

then

it came to branding. Brands open their own retail chains or they are in big shopping mall. So

instead

of visiting local

shops

market

we change our style of shopping to mall shopping. And Now a

days

we are in age on internet where everything is done online and so shopping

also

. So now no visit to malls just see online and buy whatever you like with so many options.

Although

most of new generation has changed their way of shopping to online shopping but there is always delima of shopping of

food

item. Before few years there were local retail grocery

shops

in local area from where we used to buy our

food

items

. But with changing trends foods

also

started selling in super markets in malls. And now a

days

there are e-commerce sites where you can buy

food

online. So i will discuss both the ways of doing

food

shopping through

supermarket

and online.

Food

shopping through

Supermarket

Advantages:- 1.

Food

is item which is generally seen, feel and tasted (sometimes) and

then

we buy. so in super

market

we can see live

food

. 2.

Food

items

like vegetable and fruits should be checked properly before buying. 3. Now a

days

almost all international brand foods are easily avaialble in

supermarket

, so we have variety for selection. 4. On packed

food

items

we can check expiry date before buying it. 5. By buying through

supermarket

we are helping our economy by generating jobs for staff in

supermarket

. 6. Almost all super

market

buy local

food

items

directly from farmers we are

also

generating income for them. Disadvantage 1. By visiting

supermarket

we are wasting both time and energy. 2. Cost of maintenance of

supermarket

is high

then

online so it will add up in price of

items

. So rate will increase. 3. When we personally go for purchasing many times we end up buying unwanted things. Shopping online Advantages :- 1. we can compare price online and we can buy at best possible rate. 2. Now a

days

all

Food

brands publish online all small details like expiery date, nutrition value. so it is as like physical checking only. 3. There is no maintenance cost here. 4. We get delivery of our shopping at our home at desired time so it saves time and energy both. 5. we get many options of buying single product online. Disadvantages:- 1. Many times wrong details are published and

food

products are delivered. 2.

Food

items

like fruit and vegetables are not good option to buy online as we cannot see them live and select it. Example - buying vegetable online like cucumber might you get stale product at your place. 3.It is harmful for economy in terms of employement and

also

local farmers income.

Although

new generation is turning towards online shopping, but

according to

me you can do all other things shopping online but

food

item should be bought from

supermarket

or local

shops

. It would help the economy and

also

you will be getting product of your choice and liking.

Mon Apr 06 2020

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