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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to the latest fashion. Why is it happening? Is it positive or a negative development

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It is true that
worldwide people are
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people worldwide are
 following the latest trends
such
 as fashionable clothes and even
hair styles
the arrangement of the hair (especially a woman's hair)
hairstyles
. In the following paragraphs,
reasons
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the reasons
 behind
this
 phenomenon and its drawbacks will be discussed. The underlying root of
this
 issue is mainly concatenated to social media and people’s notion of beauty as well.
First
 of all, as celebrities are ambassadors of new fashion and due to the existence of online shopping, people can be easily aware of new trends in the market. So, in most cases, these factors are directly influencing people by creating an impulse to purchase branded items.
Moreover
, being attractive and beautiful is one of the delightful feelings
for
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of
 human-being.
Hence
, people do ample things,
such
 as, buying branded dress, shoes or ornaments in order to satisfy their incentive. When it comes to
negative effects
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the negative effects
 of
this
 situation, some of the most significant drawbacks of chasing the trending fashion come to mind.
Firstly
, sometimes individuals are impelled to spend money for unnecessary purchasing
n
a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot
in
 order to show-off themselves. Certainly, it leads to waste time and money
instead
 of utilizing
this
 money for education or another investment for the future.
Secondly
, if everyone
try
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tries
 to track others’ lifestyles, especially celebrities in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 nations, they may lose their own tradition, uniqueness and might face identity crises as well. Conclusively, the excessive pursuance could lead to multitude impacts on individuals’ social and personal life
accordingly
. So, the practice of following the latest trends might bring mainly personal disorders and financial distress.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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