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The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

#cars #people
In our globalized world, the number of cars is increasing day by day, so does the pollution in many industrial countries. But pollution is not one outcome of
this
 problem. A lot of cars on the roads can create traffic jams and various accidents in peak hours. The solution of
this
 problem requires its full consideration. Nowadays, more and more affluent families can afford to buy at least three cars, or even more if they have many children. It seems that the increased use of cars can lead to pollution of the environment with pollutions. To work out, daily running cars on the roads emit harmful carbon dioxide emissions into the atmosphere that affects air quality. Significant
car
 recycling may have a bad
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
 for people's health
.
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.
As you know
,
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,
people prefer to drive their
car
 for daily trips to work and even for shorter distances.
This
 primarily reduces physical activity in people and makes them more active they are less stable to diseases
such
 as obesity, respiratory problems, heart problems and various other ailments. To save
cities
Suggestion
the cities
 from massive
car
 damage, the government must modernize vehicles and
also
 encourage people to travel on public transport. Introduction of improvement measures as metro and high-
quality comfortable
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quality, comfortable
 buses can help people in their daily commute to work and improve the air condition. So it can encourage people to stop driving their own
car
.
In addition
, the increase in the cost of fuel can
also
 stop the middle class of people from driving a
car
 every day. In conclusion
,
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,
it should be noted that excessive driving affects the overall environment of cities and can lead to various diseases.
That is
 why the government should introduce better vehicles and increase the costs of gasoline.
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