Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discussion both these views and give your opinion

The
punishment
for crimes should vary from the lowest degree possible to the highest degree possible. It is very obvious that the circumstances of one
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
a crime differ from others and so the
punishment
should be
accordingly
. When a murderer plans a murder for maybe revenge or anger, he should
definelty
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
be given a serious
punishment
.
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.
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But
when it comes to
a
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an
innocent
person
who
accidently
without advance planning
accidentally
killed someone with no intention of doing so can be given a less severe
punishment
, the
person
has clearly made a mistake and should be punished for it, but he
also
regrets it and fully knows that he was wrong in
such
cases a
person
can be acted
linently
in a permissively lenient manner
leniently
with. Surely, no one can completely recognise if who is a criminal and who is
a
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an
innocent
person
who
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
a mistake, here is where the smart officers play a vital role in distinguishing the two.
On the contrary
, there are some crimes that cannot be
forgived
stop blaming or grant forgiveness
forgiven
and need strict actions no matter what the circumstances were.
cCses
an occurrence of something
Case
Cause
CCses
of rape
are
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is
such
crimes that just cannot be judged on the basis of the circumstances of the situation. In India, if a
child rapes
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child, rape
child rape
, he is sent to
children
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children's
counsellors or hospitals and is allowed to let loose of the crime he has
commited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
. If a child has the brains to rape he is surely not a child, in
such
cases there should be strict and decided punishments that will not change on the basis of caste
,
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,
gender, age, education and will remain constant even for the president of the nation. If a conclusion is to be drawn, it
cannot be decide
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cannot decide
cannot be decided
which rule is correct and which is not because depending on the crimes the punishments and the rule have to be decided. So no set rules can be taken into action for all the crimes.

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