The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram shows the
process
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of
brick
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manufacturing in different stages for the building industries. As is presented in the diagram,
brick
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manufacturing involves about 7 steps including the digging stages to
delivery
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the delivery
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stage. As is given in the graph, the first step of
brick
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manufacturing is digging the clay with a large digger.
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clay is
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filtered and processed in a roller machine and
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mixed with sand and water. In the
third
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stage, the mixture is either kept in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to make the raw shape of the bricks. In the
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stage, the shaped raw bricks are dried for 24 to 48 hours in
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oven. After that, the dried raw bricks are kept in
kiln
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a kiln
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both
in
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moderate and high
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temperatures
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in
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up to 1300 degree centigrade and
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placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours.
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process
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makes the
brick
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to be packed and delivered in the final two steps. The delivery
process
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is the final
process
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of
brick
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manufacturing and as it is observed,
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brick making
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brick-making
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is a moderately complex
process
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that requires some predefined stages to make it deliverable.

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