The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information about the percentages of
sectors
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contributed
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that contributed
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to the
economy
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of Turkey for two periods, in 2000 and 2016.
Overall
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, in the
first
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period
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, agriculture was the most significant
sector
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contributed
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that contributed
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to the
economy
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of Turkey,
while
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the construction
sector
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was the smallest
sector
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contributed. In comparison, in the
second
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period
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, healthcare and education became the largest
economy
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segment
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of
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the
economy
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, and the lowest
contribution
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was finance, business, and others. There are four
sectors
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in which the
contribution
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increased.
First
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, in 2000, the construction
sector
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contributes
3
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% of the
economy
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and boost up more than three times to 10% in 2016.
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,
an
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income from the manufacturing
sector
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in 2000 was 8% and in 2016 it increased
half
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by half
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of the percentage to 12%.
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, a
contribution
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from trade, utilities, and transportation
sectors
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; and finance, business and other was 16% and 5% respectively and each of them slightly increased to 16% and 8%. The rest of the
sectors
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are decreased and steady. The
sector
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of agriculture which in the
first
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period
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gave an income
almost
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of almost
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a quarter of the
economy
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fell to 14% in 2016.
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, in the
first
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period
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,
a
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the
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government
sector
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contribution
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decreased from 12% to 9% after it. After that, the leisure and hospitality
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sectors
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sectors'
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contribution
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was
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slightly decreased from 17% to 14%. And
the
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last
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, there is no difference
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contribution
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in contribution
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from healthcare and education in 2000 and 2016.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, economy, first, period, sector, contribution with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contribution
  • Percentage
  • Sector
  • Economy
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Trend
  • Period
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Construction
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Trade
  • Utilities
  • Transportation
  • Finance
  • Business services
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