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describe a book or article that you enjoyed reading for your studying

#book #article
Normally I prefer to read non-story books. Recently, I read a
book
 called What customers crave? The
book
 details the relationship between a Seller and buyer who we can find
answer
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answers
 these
question
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questions
. What do customers want? How to understand your customers and know what they love and what they hate?
year
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A year
Year
 ago,
this
book
 was
also
 famous in the field of digital marketing in the world. You may be wondering why I chose
this
book
 it is interesting that it was one of the most popular books among the top eight books in the field.
However
, it was 250 pages, and I spent a week with it, I really enjoyed
this
book
 because it's useful for my business life, it helps me having more attractive
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to
 people. There is no doubt that recognizing a customer's needs can be tantamount to satisfying them and increasing the number of loyal customers. The purpose of the
book
 is that to teach you how find to
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real
 customers.
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