The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
The provided
line
graph and table
delienate
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delineate
regarding
universal
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the universal
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quantity of
water
utilization in three various categories from
20th
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the 20th
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century to the
next
subsequent hundred-year and compares
water
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the water
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expenditure number of 2 dissimilar regions namely-
Brazil
and
Congo
in two
milleniums
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millenniums
.
According to
the
line
chart,comprehensive
water
use by fields were reported with growing remarkably in these periods
while
bar
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the bar
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graph reveals that there was
a
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dominant
distinctions
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between
two
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the two
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areas in term of using
water
disbursement. When it comes to international
water
use by divisions, the culminated point was started at relatively
500km3
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500 km3
.Correspondingly to the
line
chart,the rural economy was observed with climbed significantly
over
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1990 to
the
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2000 to approximately 3.000km3.
In contrast
,the bottommost point was a section of
domestinf
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domestic
usage
was
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launched from 0km3 sam as
Industrial
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the Industrial
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sector.The
line
of domestic use was recorded
wih
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with
negligible
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upward trend and
intersection
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with mechanical utilization was
seperated
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separated
in
the
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roughly 1940. Now turning to the
water
consumption in
Brazil
and
Congo
in 2000.It can be clearly seen that
,
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Brazil
's indicators were
highly
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demand in the three outlays.In
Republic
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of
Congo
,
community's
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payment was 5.2 million which is nearly 30 times less than
Brazil
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in Brazil
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.
Obviously
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to see that,there is
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an immersely
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immersely
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immensely
interval
amonh
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among
irrigated land,
Brazil
was 26.500km2 more than about 265 times
Congo
(100km2).Moving to the
last
consumption was
water
using each individual.In
Brazil
it was 359m3 per person,
conversely
,
Congo
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in Congo
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was 8
metr
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meters
cube.
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