With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rise of technology the old mediums of
information
generally get replaced by the new mediums. In case of
newspaper
same thing is happening and some people think that if more people start using
internet
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the internet
as a source of
information
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
newspapers will soon go out of fashion. I completely agree with
this
point of view. Earlier newspapers were handwritten after the invention of printing press handwritten
newspaper
became outdated because everyone prefers things which takes
acute amount
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an acute amount
of
time
.
Similarly
, in the case of printed
newsapers masses
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newspapers, masses
newspapers masses
newspaper masses
prefer to use
internet
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the internet
to stay updated as it takes no amount of
time
as
compare
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compared
to newspapers in providing
information
. Apart from that newspapers are
also
getting digitize and
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
many users read e-paper on
there
of them or themselves
their
mobile, laptops and tablets. Using
intenet
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
for
information
is quite comfortable when
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
compare it to the
newspaper
. Not only in terms of
time
newspaper
is not very good for the environment,
today millions
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today, millions
of trees
shreded
prepared by cutting
shredded
shrouded
every day to process paper for
newspaper
and after reading that
days
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day's
newspaper
it directly goes into the trash.We cannot afford something like
this
to
happen specially
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happen, especially
happen especially
at a
time
when we are running out of resources. Other than that in long run
newspaper
is not cost effective as
compares
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compared
comparing
to
internet
. We need to bring
this
change in our
lives specially
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lives, especially
lives especially
the young
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younger
the younger
generation who is comfortable in using
internet
to avoid using
newspaper
and those who cannot afford to lose
newspaper
can try to switch to e-paper. By doing
this
we can send our message to the companies that we no longer need
newspaper
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a newspaper
newspapers
in its physical form so its better not to cut trees for producing paper.

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