The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart above illustrates the process of generating
energy
through a geothermal source. Overall
it can be seen that electricity is obtained by the heating of water
that converted
into steam can Add a missing verb
is converted
produces
Wrong verb form
produce
energy
.
The first stage involves pumping cold water
deeply until it reaches the injection well at 4.5 km. Then
the water
travels to the geothermal zone where hot rocks are embedded. After that
the heated Add a comma
,that
water
gets to the production well where is pumped up to fill the condenser at the surface.
Subsequently
the hot water
in form of steam powers a turbine. As a result
, the turbine starts to rotate at certain
speed. Add an article
a certain
Then
throughout a shaft
the rotational Add a comma
,shaft
energy
is transmitted to the generator, which due to
its internal technology and configuration, transforms the mechanical energy
into electricity.
Finally
, the produced energy
needs to be transmitted to the final costumer
through the electrical network.Correct your spelling
customer
Submitted by victorbouroncle on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, water with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼