The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart above illustrates the process of generating
energy
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through a geothermal source.
Overall
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it can be seen that electricity is obtained by the heating of
water
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that
converted
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into steam can
produces
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energy
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. The first stage involves pumping cold
water
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deeply until it reaches the injection well at 4.5 km.
Then
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the
water
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travels to the geothermal zone where hot rocks are embedded. After
that
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the heated
water
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gets to the production well where is pumped up to fill the condenser at the surface.
Subsequently
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the hot
water
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in form of steam powers a turbine.
As a result
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, the turbine starts to rotate at
certain
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speed.
Then
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throughout a
shaft
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the rotational
energy
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is transmitted to the generator, which
due to
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its internal technology and configuration, transforms the mechanical
energy
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into electricity.
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, the produced
energy
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needs to be transmitted to the final
costumer
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customer
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through the electrical network.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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