The graph shows information about book sales in bookstores in UK.

The pie chart below illustrates some information about which sales of different types of books in bookstores.

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what stands out from the graph is that Horror

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most popular

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average amount of

buyers

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it is 25

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chart Biography

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the percentage of buyers is 2 % lower than

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health

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

117 words

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The graph shows information about book sales in bookstores in UK.

With growing number of populations in cities, many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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Art should be a compulsory class for high school students. To what extend do you agree or disagree?