Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, there is a wide range of people in terms of financial status. To name

few

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a few

such

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as, High End Rich, Rich, Upper Middle Class, Middle Class, Lower Middle Class, Poor. Rich and middle class people must help poor.

Obviosly

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Obviously

, to have a good

society it

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society, it

starts with good

neighborhood

a surrounding or nearby region

neighbourhood

. Sound Body will have

sound mind

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a sound mind

sound minds

consequently

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sports

are

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must. Good habits, indeed, to be taught from

the early

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earliest

childhood, to mould the children to be responsible and to

incultivate

release from military service or remove from the active list of military service

inactivate

in cultivate

good manners, to make them generous, some of the points discussed in the above topic,

such

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as charity, improving the

neighborhood

a surrounding or nearby region

neighbourhood

or teaching sports are few to be developed in the students while they are studying in the school. Charity is

excellent habbit

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an excellent habit

excellent habit

excellent habitat

to be developed in the children. The positive side of

this

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habbit

an established custom

habit

habitat

is children will become kind towards others. Alternatively, we will have worse society.

Crime rate

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The crime rate

Crime rates

will go

high

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higher

. Being good with neighbours makes good and pleasant society to live in. Sports is

fun

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fun, in

in addition

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to it will bring physical fitness and sound health. When the students work for all these free of cost, they will learn good qualities.

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, they will become

the best

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better

citizens of the country. To conclude, these practises are

must

used to form the superlative

most

at school.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

compulsory
unpaid community service
charity
neighborhood improvement
teaching sports
empathy
social justice
transferable skills
teamwork
leadership
problem-solving
civic duty
civic engagement
educational enhancement
practical experiences
academic learning
real-world applications
social cohesion
mutual support
time management
balancing priorities

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People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?