The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates what

percentage

of people divided into 3 categories (children,

women

and

men

) in the UK ate

five

portions

of fruit and vegetables a

day

over eight years from 2001 to 2008.

Overall

, the highest

percentage

of

women

ate

five

portions

per

day

over the entire period. The year 2006 had the maximum number of

women

and

men

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five

portions

a

day

.

While

2007 had the highest number of children eating

five

portions

, in terms of

men

it had the same

figures

as that of 2006.

In contrast

, 2001 was the year with the lowest percentages of people eating

five

portions

a

day

. The

percentage

of

women

who ate fruit and vegetable

five

times a

day

started

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just over 20% in 2001. The

figures

then

rose steadily to around 35% in 2006, after which the numbers slipped to 30% by 2008. With regards to children and

men

, the

figures

were stable for the first three years with 10% and 15% respectively. From

this

point

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the

figures

began to increase gradually to around 28% and 25%

respecively

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respectively

by 2007.

However

, there was a marginal decrease in the

percentage

by the end of the period with around

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% fall in each of the categories.