The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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graduate students in Canada between 1992 and 2007.

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both females and males experienced an upward pattern.but both had some fluctuations throughout the

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.

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female

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were higher in

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.

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, the

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of females was nearly

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100000 in 1992 and it rose approximately by 5000 during the next three years. Even though there was a gradual decrease in the

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of female

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between 1995 and 1998.

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, it continued to increase steadily to the end of the

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the highest

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150000 in 2007. It was almost 60000 more than, the

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of male students

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in the same year. The

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of male

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was about 70000 in 1992 and it showed the same pattern as female students until 1995. After that, there was a dramatic decrease in the next four years. even though the

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of males increased to almost above 90000

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the end of the

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. But showed some fluctuations from 1998 to 2001.