The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
number
of passed out
graduate students in Canada between 1992 and 2007. Add a hyphen
passed-out
overall
both females and males experienced an upward pattern.but both had some fluctuations throughout the period
. Although
female graduates
were higher in number
during this
period
. Initially
, the number
of graduates
of females was nearly Correct word choice
female graduates
about
100000 in 1992 and it rose approximately by 5000 during the next three years. Even though there was a gradual decrease in the Rephrase
apply
number
of female graduates
between 1995 and 1998. However
, it continued to increase steadily to the end of the period
and hitting
the highest Wrong verb form
hit
number
of graduates
nearly about
150000 in 2007. It was almost 60000 more than, the Rephrase
apply
number
of male students graduated
in the same year. The Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
number
of male graduates
was about 70000 in 1992 and it showed the same pattern as female students until 1995. After that, there was a dramatic decrease in the next four years. even though the number
of males increased to almost above 90000 to
the end of the Change preposition
by
period
. But showed some fluctuations from 1998 to 2001.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, period, graduates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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