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The maps below ahow ashford in 2010 and Ashford now

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The map shows the Ashford in 2010 and changes in
city
Suggestion
the city
 that happened until now.
Firstly
, residential area
have become
Suggestion
has become
 more wider with new accommodations for residents.
Also
, four high-rise buildings were built near
with
Suggestion
by
 river.
Moreover
, green zone became bigger with new trees and
pond
Suggestion
a pond
 in the
down side
a negative aspect of something that is generally positive
downside
 of the road to
city
Suggestion
the city
.
Secondly
,
transport
 infrastructure has been developed, so it is to get to the city now with new bridge for ground
transport
instead
 of ferry for several people that was before. Plus,
road
Suggestion
a road
the road
 was constructed
to
Suggestion
in
new yacht marina complex so
Suggestion
the new yacht marina complex, so
the new yacht marina complex so
a new yacht marina complex so
 people can use boats and yachts as
transport
 now.
Finally
, Ashford
have become
Suggestion
has become
 more open to new inhabitants and people have more variety of
transport
 means now.
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