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Some people think that its betterto choose friends who always have same opinion as them.other believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

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It is argue of most individual that buddies should have like - minded, while others think that different approach never leads to boredom.In my opinion, if two have same mindset they can be easily understood each other.
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, those who has the same approach, so they can understand each other in every situation, person can take a strong decision on his own as he has a firm support of friends. On the other side, a person can never follow the wrong path whose peers criticizes him, because disagreement from friend alert him to choose a better way, even though remain safe from regret. In my opinion, some situation comes when we need moral support from our friends, at that time those peers who share the same thinking can understand us better way. At the end, the choosing a like minded friend always better than a unlike mind.

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