Every year several languages dies out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. (agree/disagree + opinion)

Could you imagine the
world
by just one
language
to talk?
However why
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However, why
some struggle to preserve their local
language
? Whereas, nowadays, some people think that united
language
would be better rather than several.
Hence
, they believe fewer
language
could make living easier. Because unity in
language
could impress on people`s communication across the
world
.
However
, I think that
language
relevant to specific
culture
and geographical locus.
Therefore
, it is necessary that people keep their
culture
. Today, in each geographical place, residents are communicating
by
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with
local
language
. As they can
proud
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proudly
on their cultural components like
language
.
Moreover
, other people could recognize them by their
language
. As
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to Shiraz
last
summer, I was walking in the Karimkhan street. Suddenly, my cell phone rang and
then
I started to talk with my brother, Amir. A few seconds later “Are you from Mazandaran?”
a
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A
man said. It was so amazing. “How could he realize that?” I asked myself. He replied “I am come from Mazandaran”. It was amazing that people could recognize each other with the same
culture
and geographical origin by their
language
. In spite of people who believe the local languages, other think
different
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differently
as they denounce about varieties in
language
.
However
, they think, differences in
language
is not suitable for communicating among people round the
world
,
then
it is not important that several languages dying out annually. Because fewer
language
means better connection and
easier life
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an easier life
.
Therefore
, unity in
language
would be an efficiency for
people with different both
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people, both with different
people both with different
cultures and geographical position to making
communicate
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communicating
with others. As about three hours later in Hafezieh-Shiraz, I faced to a tourist from Germany. “Please help me to find my stolen wallet.” He asked.
Then
I follow him to the nearest police station. It was the occasion that we can find the importance of united
language
for making correct communication with other people in
different
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a different culture
culture
and
language
. Even though, fewer
language
or it would be better to say unity in
language
could help people to have easy live, It is important that people in specific geographical places attempt to preserve their local
language
because I think the
world
without differences would be monotonous.
Therefore
, I hope people not only preserve their local
language
, but
also
, be able to interact with other people with different
culture
and
language
.
Submitted by ehsan.aliabadian on

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