Every year several languages dies out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. (agree/disagree + opinion)

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Could you imagine the

world

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by just one

language

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to talk?

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However why

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However, why

some struggle to preserve their local

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? Whereas, nowadays, some people think that united

language

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would be better rather than several.

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, they believe fewer

language

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could make living easier. Because unity in

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could impress on people`s communication across the

world

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, I think that

language

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relevant to specific

culture

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and geographical locus.

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, it is necessary that people keep their

culture

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. Today, in each geographical place, residents are communicating

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with

local

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. As they can

proud

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proudly

on their cultural components like

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, other people could recognize them by their

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. As

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to Shiraz

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summer, I was walking in the Karimkhan street. Suddenly, my cell phone rang and

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I started to talk with my brother, Amir. A few seconds later “Are you from Mazandaran?”

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man said. It was so amazing. “How could he realize that?” I asked myself. He replied “I am come from Mazandaran”. It was amazing that people could recognize each other with the same

culture

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and geographical origin by their

language

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. In spite of people who believe the local languages, other think

different

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differently

as they denounce about varieties in

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, they think, differences in

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is not suitable for communicating among people round the

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then

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it is not important that several languages dying out annually. Because fewer

language

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means better connection and

easier life

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an easier life

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, unity in

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would be an efficiency for

people with different both

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people, both with different

people both with different

cultures and geographical position to making

communicate

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communicating

with others. As about three hours later in Hafezieh-Shiraz, I faced to a tourist from Germany. “Please help me to find my stolen wallet.” He asked.

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I follow him to the nearest police station. It was the occasion that we can find the importance of united

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for making correct communication with other people in

different

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a different culture

culture

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and

language

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. Even though, fewer

language

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or it would be better to say unity in

language

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could help people to have easy live, It is important that people in specific geographical places attempt to preserve their local

language

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because I think the

world

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without differences would be monotonous.

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, I hope people not only preserve their local

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, but

also

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, be able to interact with other people with different

culture

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and

language

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

388 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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