1. Large businesses have big budgets for making and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying these products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

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Due to globalisation multinational companies enter in

market

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the market

and they have huge budgets for marketing as well as for promotion. They continuously advertise and small companies fail to reach the customer.

Consequently people

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Consequently, people

are drifting for buying

product

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the product

a product

products

To begin

with, as we know all large companies have their outlets even in small cities and villages and they sell products at cheaper cost so that people are easily

attract

Suggestion

attracted

for buying products. As the result of these local businesses are losing their

business

as well as affect to local economies. It directly

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

on economic growth

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Sometimes big companies are spending large proportion of their money on advertising and marketing

moreover

doesn’t provide good quality of products to customers. According to survey most of the people are attracted by large

companies

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company's

product and their high discount.

On the other hand

, government should support financially to local

business

so that they produce good quality products along with these they must sell branded products

also

. Government

also need

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also needs

to prevent multinational companies from entering in certain sectors. Local

business

too

in the direction of

know that what customer demand. Government has to motivate people buying domestic production and increase advertisements and

promoting of local

Suggestion

promoting local

companies. To conclude that

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large

business

has multiple

benefits but

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benefits, but

local

business

have their own benefit which directly helpful for economic growth. Aware people to buy local products

instead

of buying international products.

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1. Large businesses have big budgets for making and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying these products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Fully explain your ideas

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Some school leavers choose to travel or work for a year before going to university. What might be the reasons for this? What are the disadvantages of this practice?