1. Large businesses have big budgets for making and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying these products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Due to globalisation multinational companies enter in
market
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the market
and they have huge budgets for marketing as well as for promotion. They continuously advertise and small companies fail to reach the customer.
Consequently people
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Consequently, people
are drifting for buying
product
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the product
a product
products
.       
To begin
with, as we know all large companies have their outlets even in small cities and villages and they sell products at cheaper cost so that people are easily
attract
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attracted
for buying products. As the result of these local businesses are losing their
business
as well as affect to local economies. It directly
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
on economic growth
.
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.
Sometimes big companies are spending large proportion of their money on advertising and marketing
moreover
doesn’t provide good quality of products to customers. According to survey most of the people are attracted by large
companies
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company's
product and their high discount.        
On the other hand
, government should support financially to local
business
so that they produce good quality products along with these they must sell branded products
also
. Government
also need
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also needs
to prevent multinational companies from entering in certain sectors. Local
business
too
in the direction of
to
know that what customer demand.  Government has to motivate people buying domestic production and increase advertisements and
promoting of local
Suggestion
promoting local
companies.                To conclude that
,
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,
large
business
has multiple
benefits but
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benefits, but
local
business
have their own benefit which directly helpful for economic growth. Aware people to buy local products
instead
of buying international products.
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