Technological and scientific advances are changing the food people eat. Some believe that these are changes can be harmful to the health of the people. Others challenge this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s world
technology
developments are increasing day by day. Advancement of
technology
, have some negative as well as positive impact on the health of the persons. Some people feel that changes in food what people eat gives sound health to them or some think vice versa. To initiate with, the
first
and
forth
in the fourth place
fourth
disadvantage of
changes
Suggestion
the changes
is that today’s food products are being prepared with chemicals as well as with scientific machinery, not naturally,
hence
, it is hard to maintain
healthy life
Suggestion
a healthy life
for eaters. Due to unhealthy body, they are running through various diseases
for instance
, breath problems, fatty body, or even they are becoming older in early ages.
Additionally
, human beings are moving towards the time, where everything is being made by science which leads break the connection of human and nature.
Moreover
, many foodstuffs are very expensive and middle class or low class earners are not able to afford them and
this
leads to negative thoughts between upper and other two classes. Above paragraph shows that technical changes give bad effect on the lifestyles of citizens, whereas some people assert that changes are very important. To start with
second view
Suggestion
the second view
, change is the way to improve the lifestyles of the people. According to many scientists, philosophers, there is nothing fixed in
this
world and today’s trend is to reduce the human efforts so that
world
Suggestion
the world
can move towards
higher level
Suggestion
a higher level
of
technology
. Apart from
this
, some folks think that, with the advancement of foodstuffs, the menu is increased and hunger can choose according to its own taste and preference
otherwise
in previous decades they had to eat what they found. To conclude it, there are many thick and thin of progress in
technology
and after discussing both views, I strongly believe that people should not eat food which has less nutrition or prepared scientifically as it is bad for their health. Scientists should not do experiments with foodstuffs
otherwise
the earth will end very soon.
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