The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph shows how many residents and non-residents had
made a journey Unnecessary verb
apply
since
1996 until 2005. In general, in 1996 there were more residents that made a car journey. But, after the introduction of parking meters, there were more non-local citizen Change preposition
from
travelers
.
Change the spelling
travellers
Initially
, 10000residents
went into the city centre. Correct your spelling
10000 residents
Although
in 2000 they dropped at
around 5000 people, because of Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the introductionof
introductionof
parking meters into Correct your spelling
introduction of
city
centre. The lowest Add an article
the city
averaged
was reached in 2004 Replace the word
average
totaling
around 4000 for the closing to Change the spelling
totalling
traffic
of Westgate Street and Park Lane in 2002.
Non-residents, Add an article
the traffic
a traffic
instead
, were in 1996 nearly 5000. Afterwards, the average boosts at
roughly 8000 in 2000 and it remained steady until 2002. The cause of Change preposition
to
this
decline was the insertion of parking meters into city
centre in 1999. In 2003 the sum of non-residents reduced Add an article
the city
of
5000 people for the same problem of inhabitants with traffic. In 2005 the quantity of non-local citizens raised up Change preposition
to
of
5000 Change preposition
to
persons
.Replace the word
people
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