The plans below show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the changes undergone by the
town
Ashford
from
Suggestion
since
2010 till now. Overall, it is obvious that Ashford has become
more convenient place
Suggestion
a more convenient place
to live, with far more
accomodations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodations
accommodation
and transport facilities. One of the most striking changes is that many new and more modern household estates has been constructed in
north-east part
Suggestion
the northeast part
northeast part
northwest part
of the
town
.
Moreover
, new transport facilities
has been introduced
Suggestion
have been introduced
.
For instance
, in the south part of the
town
yacht marina has been built which would not exist before. Apart from these all, west and east parts of the
town
have been connected by the bridge and
therefore
ferry which used to take inhabitants from east to west side has been removed.
Last but not least
Suggestion
The last but not least
, the
town
has become more environmentally- friendly, as another green area with the pond has been established in the south-west part of it.

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