Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Talking about
film industry
, some say that the filmmakers just need to focus on their recreational Suggestion
the film industry
purpose while
some claim that it is more important to concentrate on the educational aspect of the Accept comma addition
purpose, while
film
. For myself, both arguments have their own strength.
Beginning with the first
issue, films were born with the only one purpose-recreation. The first
answer for this
reason is that film
is one of the most effective Suggestion
the film
method
for entertainment. Specifically, watching Suggestion
methods
film
is not only the easiest and cheapest way
for people to escape from the hectic stressful life but
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life, but
also
can help people to laugh and relax while enjoy
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enjoying
therefore
they can release themselves and be more optimistic. Moreover
, films are able to satisfy people. To be more clearly
, films can not only boost Suggestion
more clear
clearer
more clearer
human’s mood
with numerous entertain Suggestion
the human’s mood
scenes but
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scenes, but
also
create some memorable moments for people since they can enjoy the time with their beloved ones. Therefore
, recreational aspects should be the main purpose of the film
.
On the other hand
, watching film
is another Suggestion
the film
a film
way
of education, especially for children. To be more specific, some statistics have proved that watching film
is the best way
to catch children’s eyes
, Suggestion
the children’s eyes
therefore
if using film
to teach them, they will be more focus on the lesson and remember it longer. Or some cartoons have moral theme
can teach children how to behave with others in a right Suggestion
a moral theme
way
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way, hence
hence
helping them to grow well. Moreover
, some films with special meaning can educate adults too. In other words
, film
can help adults to have both sides look at an issue which assist them to have a specific and right judgement at the end. Take parasite as an example- which is received
the most valuable Suggestion
receiving
price
of Osca Academy something given for victory or superiority in a contest or competition or for winning a lottery
prize
this
year, through this
film
, people will witness numerous sides of society which they have not thought about before that will make them understand more about their life. Consequently
, Film
should be made to teach others.
In conclusion, personally, both aspects have the same important because they bring back a massive benefit for humans. Therefore
, entertainment and education should exist together in any films.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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