The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Dear Sam, How are you doing, the trip, which we had recently that was amazing after a long gap.

Firstly

of all, thank you so much for your gregarious company as usual. If you are not there in Sydney

this

trip wouldn't be possible and off course

this

will be even worse than the previous one. I wish we could do more like

this

outing for every couple of months, in order to get more serenity and a break for routine lifestyle. By the way, on my return to home, I forgot to take my wallet. I'm not sure about the exact location in the house where I forget. Probably it will be in your master bedroom cupboard, the one where I use to keep my belongings. In case you did not find there, the chances for the water drinking spot would be high. As soon as you find that,

first thing

Suggestion

the first thing

you just make sure keep in a safe place. Since it has various important bank cards as well as my passport. I will let you know how to send it back to me, it might be through the speed post or courier. In case if you are not sure about how to send by mail,

weekend one of my colleague coming from Sydney to India. So, you can send it by him. Once again thank you for the nice outing and those unforgettable lasting memories. See you soon.

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S, M

Best regards S M Shareef

Thu Apr 09 2020

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