As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

Nowadays, many countries in the world
is becoming
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are becoming
developed and they
seeing
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are seeing
reduction
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a reduction
in the size of
family
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the family
. There are some reasons why
smaller size family have gained
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the smaller size family, has gained
smaller size family has gained
the smaller size family has gained
the smaller size family have gained
popular
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popularity
in developed countries. In
this
day and age,
government
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the government
doesn't invest an enormous amount of money to each family in order to support
theirs
of them or themselves
their
family.
For example
, parents raise up their children is costly. Parents need to bring children go to a good school
,
Accept space
,
providing a good life for them etc. In
this
case
,
Accept space
,
if
government
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the government
doesn't give
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
money of each family
,
Accept space
,
some poor family will
hard
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harden
to support their family.
This
trend
,
Accept space
,
affect community in many ways. One negative impact is the country will
no
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
enough young people in the workforce in the future.One of the positive impact is parents can provide their children have a better living environment or education.Beside that
,
Accept space
,
people have more employment opportunities which they have
perpose
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a purpose
purpose
proposed
. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
due to the perfect social higher cost of raising up children
,
Accept space
,
people prefer to have
an
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a
smaller family size and it has a positive and negative impact.
This
trend will become
more popularity
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more popular
in developed countries.
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