The table shows the proportions of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table shows the proportions of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.
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The table below depicts information regarding the percentage of income spent across 4 common items (food, electronic equipment, music,
videos
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) in the UK by
adults
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and
children
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in 1998.
Overall
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,
While
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adults
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spent most of their income on food,
children
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preferred music.
Videos
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were one of the least spent on items for both
adults
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and
children
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. Focusing on
adults
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, about 23% of their income was spent on food, with women accounting for most of
this
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at 39% and men only 14%.
In contrast
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, electronic equipment was purchased more by men than women (10% and 1% respectively).
Videos
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were the least popular category among
adults
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with only 1% of the money earned spent on it.
On the other hand
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,
children
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utilised a major proportion of their money on music with boys and girls spending almost the same.
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although
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videos
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were not the most popular item on the list both boys and girls spent almost the same on them with 18% and 17% respectively. The item with the biggest disparity among the young was electronic equipment, with boys spending 18% of their expenses on it compared to girls who only spent 5%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words videos, adults, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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