One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: - Apologise for missing the birthday celebration - Explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend - And say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry

Dear Robert I hope you enjoyed your birthday party
last
Monday but I am really sorry that I could not
attended
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your birthday celebration And the main purpose of
this
letter is
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apologies
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for my absence without informing you . To be honest , one of my cousins , who has lived in Vancouver , called me
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last
Sunday
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he was on the way to visit us . She requested me to received his in
airport
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on Monday at 6:00 pm , and I could not say no to his because he came after 10 years and he is not only my cousin but
also
my childhood close friend ,
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I went to
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with my parent and come back with my cousin at 8:30 pm . for
this
reason I could not be present to your birthday . Now, I will invite you to your favorite restaurant in
next
Friday and I hope you forgive me . Cheers Hamidreza.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartfelt
  • unavoidable circumstances
  • last-minute emergencies
  • caught up
  • misjudging
  • make amends
  • thoughtful
  • exclusively
  • personal letter
  • value
  • regret
  • special day out
  • arranging a surprise
  • friendship
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