you see the above advertisement for a course design to help improve your memory write a letter to the organizers of the course in the letter give some background information about yourself and explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course inquire about the methods used on the course inquire about course fees and dates you should write at least 150 words you do not need to write any addresses you should begin your letter with dear Sir or Madam.

#advertisement #course #design #memory #organizers #background #information #methods #fees #dates #addresses #sir #madam

Dear sir or Madame; I’m an accounting student from Islamic Azad

university

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University

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of Tonekabon, I’m 21 years old and when I was 19 I understood that I have small problems in remembering little simple things. I forgot little words or names and

also

numbers. I started using different methods like doing puzzles,

crossword

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and Suduko and something like

this

to make my mind run but they didn’t help me.

Last

week; When I was walking I saw your advertisement on the sidewalk and I picked it up and took it home to read it carefully and write a letter to ask how much is

this

course? When does it start? And

also

how much do you guarantee after 10 weeks? I would be grateful if you can give me more detailed information about the method that you use in the course. I think I could benefit greatly from your course, look forward to your reply.Yours faithfully

Thu Apr 09 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

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