Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Even
in
Change preposition
with
this
modern technology still
some Add a comma
still,
countries
are struggling for minimum essentials like food, health and education. Whereas
some countries
in this
world are overloaded with wealth and development can help these undeveloped nations in terms of basic necessities. I agree with the statement that governments of developed countries
should have responsibility in
developing the poorer Change preposition
for
countries
. Even in 21 st
century, it is Correct your spelling
the 21st
fact
that there are people in many Correct article usage
a fact
countries
are
not Verb problem
who do
having
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have
proper
facilities to survive. The governments of these nations are unable to facilitate their people with daily needs because of their Correct article usage
the proper
country
financial situations. Change noun form
country's
For instance
, some
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in some
of
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apply
the
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apply
counties
in Africa people are dying because Correct your spelling
countries
on
food and Change preposition
of
not
able to have proper health facilities. But, Add a missing verb
are not
countries
which are high in financial growth can help (or) adopt
these Correct your spelling
adapt
countries
to develop
by helping in terms of cultivating lands with Replace the word
development
latest
technologies, building hospitals and Correct article usage
the latest
by
providing good education to the younger generation. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, for any country
their economic growth will improve by importing and exporting of goods. As per the INCO terms of global trading business for doing any import and export business there are so many conditions and taxes Add a comma
country,
has
to be paid. So, to develop the economic growth of backward Wrong verb form
that have
countries
rich countries
has
to support by exempting the taxes and Correct subject-verb agreement
have
also
by establishing manufacturing industries in these places. Finally
, in my opinion, to develop poor countries
the governments of developed nations has
to come forward and support Correct subject-verb agreement
have
for
the basic essentials to live Change preposition
apply
human
life. Add an article
a human
In
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On
this
earth
it is each and every individual responsibility to help each other and to remember we all Add a comma
earth,
are belong
to Change the verb form
belong
same
family of humanity.Change the article
the same
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite