The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The bar chart illustrates
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information about the proportion of
incidents
and
injuries
per 100 million passenger miles travelled by transportation type in 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that
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most
incidents
and
injuries
came about on demand-response transports.
However
, commuter
rail
services
recorded by far the lowest statistics. In 2002, the number of 225
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and 173
injuries
mills travelled, came about on demand-response transport
services
. In the same way, these statistics were approximately
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as high as those for the
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category, bus
services
. There were 76
incidents
and 66 people were injured on buses.
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total of
incidents
on light
rail
trains stayed the same recorded for buses, but there were moderately fewer
injuries
, at only 39. Heavy
rail
services
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numbers of
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than light
rail
services
, but commuter
rail
passengers were even less likely to experience problems. In total,
it is clear that
only 20
incidents
and 17
injuries
occurred on commuter trains.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents, injuries, rail, services with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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