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compare and contrast life in the countryside and that in urban areas

#contrast #life #countryside #areas
These days, a majority of people prefer living in the
city
 to living in the
country
.
This
 is a trend
that is
 becoming more popular in many countries around the world.
Although
 there are several similarities between
city
life
 and
country
life
, there are
also
 some very important differences so that
life
 in the
countryside
 and that in urban areas have
differentiation
Suggestion
different
differing
 obviously. Living under the same
country but
Accept comma addition
country, but
 of different regions, rural and urban,
besides
 sharing several things in common, often vary greatly in cost of living. Both the
city
 and the
countryside
 have the same education and medical care.
However
, in
city
Suggestion
the city
, they have many modern and well-equipped hospitals, which lead to a higher price of medical care to pay for those better services.
In contrast
, the expense that people in rural area have to pay for medical care is a lot cheaper due to its backward facilities. The same situation happens
for
Suggestion
in
to
education cost category
Suggestion
the education cost category
. The amount of money that a
city
 parent needs to invest in their children’s education can be fifth times as huge as that of their
country
 counterparts.
In addition
, lifestyle of the two places are not always the same.
Firstly
, the technology of the urban is similar to the technology of the
city
. People who live in the two areas might have and use many different kinds of technology.
However
, people who live in the
city
 can have more opportunities to access to new technologies than people who live in the
countryside
.
Secondly
, while people tend to leave
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
 due to its decrease in jobs,
city
Suggestion
the city
 is climbing in the quantity of people moving to it so as to seek better employment.
However
, in
country
Suggestion
the country
countries
, the main
career
someone whose employment involves carrying something
carrier
 is still farming. There are fewer choices for them to decide their employment. In conclusion,
although
city
life
 and
countryside
life
 have similar
fearture
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
features
, they have many differences
such
 as
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, cost of living so that all people can differentiate between
life
 in the
countryside
 and that in urban areas obviously. Each region has its own unique advantages and drawbacks, but the most important thing is that everyone can choose where they live based on each person’s interest and character.
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