Should wealthy nation be required to share their wealth and resources among poor nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the goverments of poor nation to look after their citizen themselves.

Our world is a diverse place and not always in better condition, especially to the underprivileged children. There are many people who fall under below the poverty line and are unable to afford two times meal every day. It is a kind, vicious circle of poverty

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those people can not get out of it. These poor people started having a stereotype that being poor is on their fate and

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, it is the responsibility of the governments to look after their citizen and fulfil their basic needs. As a matter of fact that out here,

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and renowned politicians are not taking their duties seriously

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they are involved in to corruptions, crimes, bribe so on.

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, poor nations becoming poorer and their people suffer because of these ignorant and corrupted high authorities. Charities and foundations have always been there to provide and support to those people in poor countries through fund raising campaign, donation of lump sum amount

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wealthy people in order to uplift those people who are lacking Fooding and education systems. Especially to the children who

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get a chance to study and can't have at least two times meal per day.

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, if the wealthy nation started sharing their wealth and resources to other developing countries,

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it would be an injustice to their own native people. As many citizens are levied to pay their

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. In those developed countries, if the

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agrees to share, but the citizens wouldn't

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decision and actions taken by their

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. Because they all are hard working and putting lots of efforts to make their life as well nation better. If their nation started transferring their

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of providing them a better life, it would be an injustice to them. To conclude, despite all these problems if wealthy countries agree to share some amount and resources with underdeveloped countries

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world will suffer less. In terms of humanity doing good deeds is always better.

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is a duty of

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to take care of its people.

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exists because of these people.