Gone are the days when children dreamed of becoming doctors and nurses – today’s children want to become YouTubers or vloggers. According to a survey of 1,000 children aged six to 17, more than three quarters of them say they’d consider a career in online videos. (Adapted from --DELETED LINK-- children-want-YouTubers-vloggers.html) It is dangerous for kids to aspire to become a YouTube sensation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to

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thousand children between the ages of six and seventeen, more than

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of them say they considered online videos

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as their desired career. There are a lot of assumptions that it is hazardous for kids to dream of becoming a

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phenomenon. To a certain

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I agree with

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assumption and I will discuss more in the following paragraphs. On the one hand,

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is incredibly famous, coming in second place for the most widely used search engine worldwide. That leads to its billions of

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per day and the profit it brings to the creators can be seen evidently.

However

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Firstly

, the

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people can get from it is unstable. Maybe one day you post an interesting video on

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and you gain a huge number of views and your

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rise dramatically. But after that, you cannot keep up your form and you earn no profit at all. Online networks are consistently changing

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, and the failure of any social media network may be quicker than expected.

Secondly

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has put a lot of policies in place

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that have a huge impact on small creators. People with

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subcribers

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under 100000 can not gain any money.

On the other hand

, it is no different between a kid who wants to be an athlete, a musician, or an actress and a kid

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to become a

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sensation. Everybody can play soccer,

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sing,

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act, or film themselves and post it online. Doing all of these things for a living thing,

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, requires hard work and creativity. But if it is the kid’s passion and he

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to chase it seriously, he deserves a plus point. In conclusion, I assume that children have all the

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to choose their dream job but they should consider the limitations of becoming

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online video creator.