Using social media as Facebook,Twitter is replacing face to face communication in this century. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The invent of the technologies have made life

comperatively

in a relative manner; by comparison to something else

comparatively

easy. Through

development

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the development

of the latest software have

benefit

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benefited

in the many sectors, mainly in

communication

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. Now we can directly chat or talk with other people with

help

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the help

of leading edge technologies like mobile.

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however

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However

, there are some drawbacks of the

technology

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eassay

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

will discuss the pros and cons of technologies.

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one

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One

the

one

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hand, technologies has a plethora of benefits in our daily life.

since

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Since

one

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of the

benefit

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benefits

of the

technology

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is that it is

convinent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

indeed

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Indeed

commication

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from

one

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country to another country being

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home is possible due to

technology

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exemplify, corona pandemic and lockdown has great impact

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daily life.

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The

South Asian meeting was about to cancel due to

this

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. Thanks to

technology

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, the South Asian

confress

a prearranged meeting for consultation or exchange of information or discussion (especially one with a formal agenda)

conference

congress

conducted successfully with the help of Skype.

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communication

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using social media helps to save

time

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. Unlike in the past, we do not need to send the letter and wait a long

time

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for response from

other side

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the other side

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Now

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just takes

few

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to send message with

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the message

message

a message

messenger

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and so forth.

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short, social media is more

convienent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

and and

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

quick.

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the other hand, people are spending most of the

time

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using the

facebook

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Facebook

instagram

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and other social media.

juvenile

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Juvenile

and grown ups are giving more priority to the social media which has hindered their education as well as health.

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for

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instance, different research has shown that, most of the people who spent more

time

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mobile and laptop are suffering from eye problems.

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similarly

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Similarly

, despite the fact that social media has made

communication

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easier it

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easier, it

also

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has

create

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created

distance between people.

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communication

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Communication

using digital media are not on par to face to face

communication

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in term of feelings. In brief, social media are becoming deleterious to health and people's feeling.

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recapitulate,

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essay discussed the merits and demerits of social media.

social

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Social

media is advantageous from many ways.

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however

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However

, we cannot deny that there

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some limitation of digital media.

refers to the speaker or writer

think it

depend

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depends

upon the people either it is

advanatgeous

giving an advantage

advantageous

or disadvantageous.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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352 words

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