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Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

#people #children #city #life #countryside #places
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There is mixed opinion about whether to grow up kids in cities or at
countryside
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the countryside
,
this
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 essay discusses
benefits
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the benefits
 and drawbacks of both the aspects.
However
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, cities have some more drawbacks than countryside which will be discussed in
this
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 essay. On the one hand, modernization has put people to think positive about growing their kids in
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city
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the city
a city
 to get advanced education and medical facilities.
Moreover
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, most of the industries are in
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city
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the city
 so getting jobs or internships is possible, which gives
professional edge
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the professional edge
 to students, which indeed can land a job for them, or even entrepreneurship ideas are possible.
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, there are few downsides
too
in the direction of
to
such
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 as pollution and noise
also
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 crowd, which leads to less peace of mind.
Such
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 lifestyle can generate lifestyle diseases.
For example
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, because of
fast
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the fast life
life
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 in
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city
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the city
a city
cities
, there is
high chance
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a high chance
 of one eating junk food and face pollution and get cancer which is injurious to health of growing kids.
On the other hand
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,
countryside
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the countryside
 has peace of mind, there is zero pollution and no crowd, no traffic problems and clear and fresh air. All these good points are lucrative for kids to have
healthy
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a healthy life
life
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. Kids can be grown up with low cost in villages because required amenities
such
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 as
place
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a place
places
 to stay and food items is cheaper in rural areas.
However
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, there are disadvantages too,
such
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 as lack of quality of education, there are no industries so kids
can not
can not
cannot
 get professional touch. Another point to mention is medical facilities,
such
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 as modern facilities in hospitals will not be available readily.
For example
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, many cases are seen to rush to
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city hospital
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the city hospital
 to resolve the complexities in childbirth. To sum
up both
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up, both
 the lifestyles have merits and demerits, one should choose whatever is preferred for the sole benefit of health and opportunities. Countryside
life
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 is
healthy whereas
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healthy, whereas
city
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life
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 is having more opportunities.
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