Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

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It is an indisputable fact that average activity among the

population

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has been

dreasing

becoming less or smaller

decreasing

rapidly during the

last

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decade.

Consequently

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majority

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the majority

a majority

of doctors tend to think that it may have a dramatic adverse effect on citizens’ health.

This

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essay will examine the main causes of

this

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tendency and demonstrate appropriate solutions to motivate people to exercise.

Firstly

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, modern technologies created fascinating multiplayer games and reduced active

sport

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, my kids habitually play in Call Of Duty with their friends

Suggestion

from

the Internet now, but they played

socker

a football game in which two teams of 11 players try to kick or head a ball into the opponents' goal

soccer

before a purchase of a computer. As it

combains

have or possess in combination

combines

with overall decreasing of specialities which require strength and stamina, the average level of physical pressure on a worker has been significantly reduced.

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, creation of state-of-the-art devices

Accept space

which allow anyone to socialise online, and

movement

Suggestion

the movement

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

market from physical to mental duties are the main causes why the whole

population

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do not exercise

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does not exercise

enough.

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, society can beneficially affect the lack of

exercies

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

by creation of

sport

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clubs in educational facilities.

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, since the authorities of Russia issued a law, which obliged any school to organize

such

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clubs, an average obesity level among the

yongsters

a young person of either sex

youngsters

youngster

has been

drammatically

in a very impressive manner

dramatically

decreased as it was announced by a new

organization Russia

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organization in Russia

Today. Due to the fact that the government can

also

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propogate

transmit from one generation to the next

propagate

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sport

the activity of providing for or maintaining by supplying with money or necessities

support

among the adult

population

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, improvement of health among citizens is predicted.

Thus

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, opening of

sport

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clubs in schools and

spreading importance

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the spreading importance

of exercises among countries are the best ways to increase fitness of

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population

Suggestion

the population

a population

. To conclude, modern technologies replaced a lot of social physical activities.

Moreover

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, decreasing of physical demands in

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

market can be clearly seen.

However

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, society can tackle the problem of lack of

exercies

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

by organization of

sport

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clubs in schools and by usage of social media to

propogate

transmit from one generation to the next

propagate

active form

Suggestion

the active form

of living. It is hoped that in the future

this

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changes

Suggestion

change

would be implemented and the

threath

something that is a source of danger

threat

truth

of obesity would be completely solved.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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326 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary lifestyles
digital entertainment
urbanization
green spaces
pedestrian areas
time constraints
lack of awareness
active transportation
infrastructure
workplace wellness programs
public awareness campaigns
incentivizing

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Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Computers and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centre or malls to do their shopping Is this a positive or a negative development?

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.