People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint

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Some
indiviuals
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individual
individuals
individual's
arguments that seeking a
job
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in
different
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a different company
company
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is
give
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giving
given
us high wage
opperunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
evenmore
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even more
have a chance to meet new folks and gain
expercince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that doing a
job
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at
same
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the same company
company
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is
good idea
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a good idea
rather than
change
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it for bit high wages.
there
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are so many pros and cons behind
it but
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it, but
advantages
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the advantages
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are
overweigh on disadvantages.
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all, there are so many reasons to
suppourt
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
supports
that
regular
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regularly
change
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the
job
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give
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gives
them
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
in many
ways
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ways, such
such
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as
,
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,
high wage and gain differ
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expercience
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experienced
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know
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knows
that
,
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,
if you have a high
skill
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skill, experience
skill experience
expercience
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then
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you have not worry about
get
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getting
a new
job
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because there are so many positions are empty for
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expercience
having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation
experienced
folks in any
relevent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
field.
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally believe that people who
change
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their jobs
regular
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regularly
get more
incetive
spontaneously derived from or prompted by a natural tendency
intuitive
than who stuck in one workplace.
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on
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On
the other hand
,
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,
there are some other reasons behind it
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,
such
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as inflation.
in
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In
some country inflation is
incerse
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increasing
increase
increased
day by day and a
comman
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
man can not
efford
be able to spare or give up
afford
their basic needs with
the low
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the lowest
wages so that they
change
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their
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job regular
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regular job
if they get
high
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higher
wages from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
company
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.
Secoundly
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Secondly
,
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,
some
company
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employers
are take
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are taking
have taken
take
a advantages from fresh work to give them low wages so that
,
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,
in
meantime they
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the meantime, they
the meantime they
get
better oppertuinty
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a better opportunity
better opportunity
from another employer they move quickly.Sometime female worker
are
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is
face
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facing
harssment
a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented
harassment
from their
owner
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own
and from another
employe
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employee
employer
so these type
circumstance
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circumstances
they are not able to work so that they
change
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thire
of them or themselves
their
employer. To sum up
,
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,
seeking a new option in
market
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the market
a market
regarding their
job
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is not create
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is not creating
doesn't create
does not create
has not created
a drawback in their
prffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
life even
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life, even
its the time to gain more
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expercience
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
with high wages.

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