Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating to the environment, population and education as well . What problems will your country face in the next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome

Nowadays, it is quite difficult to live in any country whole over the world because nations are facing some serious
problem
such
as overpopulation, uneducated and
problem
related to the
environment
. If these problems increase rapidly
then
it will create some other complications
problem
in the
future
.
First
of all, the remaining challenge is overcrowded nations. People in India do not serious about family planning due to
this
population of the country is increasing day by day. If it expands it continuously
then
people will not survive long because it will be quite hard to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the basic needs of society. The government should make some strict rule related to family planning and provide awareness about its hazardous to overcome
this
situation.
Secondly
, due to modernization, the
environment
suffers most. People cut the trees for their own benefits
such
as for accommodation, supermarket, roads and so on. It will produce some complication related to health in the
future
. To overcome these individuals should plant trees and should not use the biodegradable product to save the
environment
.
Last
but not least, today education becomes a business to gain profit from it.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that, management of institute
fix
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fixes
higher academic fees to get a renowned degree which is not affordable by everyone.
As a result
of it, middle-class children do not get higher
education
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education, therefore
therefore
, they will face unemployment in the
future
. The pupils are the
future
of
nation
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the nation
a nation
so
government
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the government
should do education
tax fee
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tax, fee
which helps to solve
this
trouble.
To
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In
conclusion, illiteracy, over-population, and bad
environment these
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environment, these
are the main
problem
which countries
face but
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face, but
if society and government take
these challenge
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these challenges
this challenge
seriously
then
it will be solved in the
next
few years.
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