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You should write at least 150 words. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

You should write at least 150 words. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The figure shows how the village
Chorleywood
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 was developed between 1868 and 1994. As illustrated, there are four main periods. The first
period
 lasted for 15 years and began in 1868. During that time, there has been just a very small group of people living along the main road near
Chorleywood
 Park. In the
second
period
 starting from 1883 to 1922, more people started spreading around
Chorleywood
 station
with
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twice the size of the population in the first
period
. The population was even bigger in the
third
period
 which happened after that and continued until 1970.
Instead
 of living around the station, they went to live along the railway opposite
to
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the side of
Chorleywood
 Park.
Finally
, between 1970 and 1994, the population had reached 10 times larger than it was in the first
period
. During
this
 24-year
period
, there were a huge number of buildings located along the two sides of the motorway.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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