As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.

NOWADAYS, computers are inevitable in
eac
(used of count nouns) every one considered individually
each
had every field. OUR dependency on computers is increasing day by day. All the fields
,
Accept space
,
which we can see in our daily life are now fully equipped with computer applications.
However
the ever growing
use
of computers
is replacing
Suggestion
has replaced
more and more jobs,
that is
the main area of concern. Currently, new softwares can be developed exclusively designed for a particular field. To exemplify, nowadays more and more online education classes are being introduced that can be easily accessible by the students from home itself
,
Accept space
,
therefore
cutting a lot of jobs that were linked to the physical classrooms.
Futher
Suggestion
Further
Father
, in transport authority
also
, now the driving licenses can be made through online process and the driving tests are too judged by a specially designed automatic driving test,
thus
clearly limiting the requirement of physical
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
.
Likewise
, in the area of production of food products, now the
use
of colour sorting machines specially designed based on the computer application
have replaced
Suggestion
has replaced
the requirement of labour to hand pick the impurities from the food products. Very recently, in the case of pandemic disease, frightening the whole world
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
the
Suggestion
The
COVID-19 virus, the various tests are conducted and evaluated to detect the
infectants
communicate a disease to
infects
and cure them. IN the whole process from testing to treatment, the
use
of technology and computers can be seen,
thus
replacing a lot of human power that
otherwise
would have been required.
Therefore
, it can be clearly seen that ever increasing
use
of computer will continue to replace the human workforce.
Thus
, resulting in increase of
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
computation
among people to procure the remaining jobs. The sense of insecurity leading to ever increasing stress to perform,
finally
resulting in deteriorating mental and physical health. To finalise the resultant effect of the ever- increasing application of technology is
the bad
Suggestion
the worst
health both mentally as well as physically, the foremost drawback of
this
wonderful invention.

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