At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

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a major proportion

the major proportion

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the country's population

country's population

a country's population

countries' population

population

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was

mainly young adults as

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comparison

compared

comparisons

to the number of elderly folks in each

country

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the latter end

To begin

with,the advantages of increased

Youth

population

can not be over estimated as the benefit outweigh the disadvantages,

firstly

the

youth

are the futures of tommorow,in

this

case when assessing the economic effects of the high

youth

population

it seems is very important factor in contributing to economic of the countries

for

example

most seniors are in their retirement age receiving income from the Government ,so for Government of each

country

to maintain constant pension payments

this

requre a lot of

youth

in workforce paying their taxes and

this

will inturn sustain each

country

economy. More

also

,

for

example

for

Country

like C

anada which

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Canada, which

has f

ewers

(comparative of 'few' used with count nouns) quantifier meaning a smaller number of

fewer

youth

comparing to the number of older a

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adults

and

that is

why c

anada

a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada

Canada

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ngage

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engages

in immigration in order to fill the port hole in

population

margins by allowing more

youth

to come to

c

ountry

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the country

and

this

tremendously increased their working

youth

number and improve the Canadian economic status. l

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ooking into the disadvantages more

Youth

in the

country

.

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Firstly

the

youth

need to empower by

country

,

for

example

some

country

have free education up to high school while some

country

give access to loan for Tertiary education and these enable the

youth

to contribute positively to the

society

at long run and

also

there is a lot of jobs in the

society

for

youth

but

this

is different in each

country

for

example

in a

country

where job opportunities is less and

also

more illiterate

youth

there is a lot of crime because majority of the

youth

are not educated and

this

pose a threat to the of older people in the

society

,like stealing engage in frauds and all sort of criminals activities. l

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conclusion, l believe the benefit of h

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the high population

population

of

youth

outweigh the disadvantages as

this

show positive trend in economics part of the c

ountries

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country

and

also

sustained the financial benefits of the retired Senior in our

society

.