Some Parents think that watching television and playing computer video games is beneficial for children development some say it has a negative impact on children development.Give opinions on both the ideas with e.g.

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more than is needed, desired, or required

extra

-curricular activities like watching television and playing games, either indoor or outdoor games, are necessary for a

child

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mental and physical build up. It is a controversial topic

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as some people appreciate it while some are

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in contact with

against

it. At early ages

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an age of

intellecutal

of or associated with or requiring the use of the mind

intellectual

and mental growth, children can learn basic skills easily

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age, they should have facilities of playing games and learn through different television programs.

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will not only builds the skills of a

child

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, but can make

one

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active and energetic. Today, we are living in a materialistic world and people with different skills are wanted at any field.

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, if a

child

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learn

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learns

to play tennis at early ages

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one

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develop

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develops

so fine skills in that game as these are

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in

demand now and appreciates by people.

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In fact

, there are chances to play at international level as a champion.

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, if children learn some basic skills at

early

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earlier

ages,

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they are considered as

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and

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kind of people are really

on

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in

demand in

near future

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the near future

when they will become professionals.

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, there are many hazards if children are allowed to watch television or remain indulged in playing video games.

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, by looking

contiously

with awareness

consciously

at

screen

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the screen

will have negative effects on their eyesights, and

infact

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in fact

at early ages it will affect mental

actvity

any specific behavior

activity

badly.

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Secondly

, a

child

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may

lost

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lose

interest in studies and become irritable, as

one

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wants to remain in his/her imaginative

games

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game

world. These negative impressions leads to immoral behaviour of a

child

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.As quoted, if a

child

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continously play

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continuously plays

continuously play

continually play

a game, and no

one

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is paying attention

toward

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to

that

child

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, a sense of being neglected will have its own effects on that apart from education and behaviours are suffering from it. In conclusion,

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games are important for children, but parents should have

hold

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held

on all

activites

any specific behavior

activities

of a

child

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and they are

allowes

make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen

allowed

to play games for

few hours

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a few hours

, as time

managent

the act of managing something

management

is

importnat

of great significance or value

important

there

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they're

to control a

child

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while nurturing him or her.