Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

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Many people like to have their own vehicles like cars or motorbikes, while some individuals
use
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other means for travelling purposes, that are
include
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included
in public
transport
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, like train, bus or
rikshaw
a small two-wheeled cart for one passenger; pulled by one person
rickshaw
. There are many merits and
demertis
a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerits
of using public
transport
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, and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am describing in
further
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paragraphs. As many people do not have own cars or other means of
transport
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, so they have to
use
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the travel facility
that is
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common for all people in society. People can have many benefits of these locomotives.
Firstly
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, one can have reasonable fair of these vehicles, as they can easily afford the cost of
tracelling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
Secondly
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, people can approach to the stations, where a bus or train can pick people, easily and sometimes they have these stations nearby their home at walking distances.
Thirdly
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, it will provide a chance to become social. As quoted, when a person
continously
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continually uses
continually use
continuously use
use
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a vehicle
then
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it is a
possibilty
a future prospect or potential
possibility
to have a friendship with particular people, especially with those who are using
same vehicle
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the same vehicle
at
same time
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the same time
, and to spend good time during way to work. People want to have their own fleet, which they can
use
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for going to work places as these are
comfortable
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comfortably
more comfortable
comforting
and available to them all the time. On
contrary
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the contrary
, there are many disadvantages of using the public
transport
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, as these places are congested and
unhygienic
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.
Mostly
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Most
people have to wait even for hours, so that they can pick a bus and can reach to their destination. Sometimes drivers drive
irrationaly
not consistent with or using reason
irrational
that can
resulted
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result
into an accident.
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, during rainy
seasons these
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seasons, these
facilities do not work properly, as mostly trains and
buse
a vehicle carrying many passengers; used for public transport
buses
bus
busses
comes late and can not follow
schedule
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a schedule
. In conclusion, people are bestowed with many
transport
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facilities. These travelling moods are available to people to provide facilities
to
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for
every
memeber
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
member
members
in society on equal levels,
although
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there are some flaws of these facilities but can
b
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
managed by making amendments.
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