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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the number of
students
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
 both genders who enrolled in different
courses
 at UK University in 2009. As
this
 diagram shows, in all
courses
men
 enrolled more than
women
 except in The Veterinary medicine
course
. In the first three
courses
 which are non-medical
courses
, the gaps between
men
 and
women
 is was so many. Especially in the Physics
course
,
that is
 was almost 200
men
 or in another way one-fifth of the class were
women
. The gap in the other two was less.
However
, in three medical
courses
,
this
 gap was the least approximately 15 to 20 people. As
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
can be seen, the Biology
course
 had
most
Correct article usage
the most
show examples
students
 in sum (
men
 and
women
) and Veterinary medicine had the least number of
students
.
Overall
,
this
 chart shows the number of enrollment of
students
, in different
courses
which
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in which
show examples
 the
men
 enrollment in
courses
are
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apply
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more than
woman
Fix the agreement mistake
women
show examples
 except in
Veterinary
Correct article usage
the Veterinary
show examples
 medicine
course
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, courses, men, women, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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