Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In nowadays,
science
and technology
are developing quickly and humans are adapting to that. So, some people think that these types of subjects are becoming more crucial than history
. But others think that learning History
is still important for children. In my opinion, all the subjects of science
, technology
and history
are equally significant in education.
In recent years, so many scientific and technological innovations are announced and created by us. Also
, parents and teachers are predicting that becoming a scientist or technology
engineers are paid more than other professions. I agree with that too. Because, there are a few reasons. Firstly
, the biggest companies have become technological companies such
as Apple, Facebook. So, these companies are creating more jobs for technology
geeks. Secondly
, our lifestyle is stuck with science
and technology and
we are surrounded by these new but old ideas.
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technology, and
However
, these concepts are becoming more understable
to us, we always need to learn from our past and should be proud of our ancestors. Opportunities - we have now, chances - we are seizing, land - we are living on, food - we are eating, peace - in our mind inherit from our ancestors. Also
, they left their history
to teach us what we should do or what we shouldn’t. For example
, rather than we fight with each other, we should be united and cooperate with each other. And they did that for us to bring the future with high technology
and science
which we are loving now.
In conclusion, I want to mention again that learning science
, technology
and history
are equally important. So, in high school, these subjects should teach equally and interestingly. If we can do that, our youngsters can learn from the past and create a bright future.Submitted by doljin.tsend on
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