Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
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bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
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government
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species
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bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
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humans
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bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
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logical
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rule
and preserve under forest areaSuggestion
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