Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The
world
has been suffering from
burning issue
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the burning issue
of abolition
species
and
world
loss of
bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
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Which plays significant role in increase global warming effect
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government
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Government
and individual should take action
for
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to
resolve
this
issue
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However some
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However, some
solution
can help us to overcome
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Both the cause and
solution
discussed
further
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Focusing on cause most dangerous reason is human materialist thinking
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Humans are selfish thinking responsible for damage
species
and
bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
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humans
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Humans
are killing animal for different purpose
such
as use as a food
,
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animal skin use for make branded shoes and pocket
,
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hunting animal for pleasure
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Due to industry and transport system development farms are cutting down
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In
world
population has increased parallel food requirement
also
hike for
this
food requirement fulfil require more area for farming
therefore
forest convert into farmland
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I believe that
this
is
major reason
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a major reason
the major reason
for
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to
ruin
species
and loss of
bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
.
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Beside
this
some natural accident is
also
responsible
for
instance in
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instance, in
2019
world
biggest forest fire in amazon 40% area and destroyed all
species
and plants
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On the other
hand there
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hand, there
are few fruitful
suggestion
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suggestions
which can control the problem
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The
logically
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logical
solution
is government should make
rule
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the rules
rules
and preserve under forest area
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Government should give protection to some
species
which will annulment in short time
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Government
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The government
should start
collect
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collecting
heavy penalty from who damage the nature
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It
can be conclude
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can be concluded
that
although
there are a few problems raised against
world
eco-system a few
solution
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solutions
can help
dial
act on verbally or in some form of artistic expression
deal
with
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agglomerating
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Agglomerating
all the
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all, the
point elaborated
above it
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above, it
can be concluded that by getting futuristic and proactive we can make
change favourable
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a change favourable
to us
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  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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