For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Education over the year change drastically. In the past, essential areas of education
was reading
Suggestion
were reading
, writing and maths.
However
, in
recent years type
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the recent year type
recent year type
of education changed and now people have an opinion that laptops and desktops should be added into
important subjects list
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the important subjects list
. I agree with
this
view because of data accuracy, work shifting to
computer
system and future growth.
To begin
with, there are many tasks performed by humans in the past, but in
recent year majority
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the recent year majority
of these tasks are assigned to computers. In the past all the designing and development of cars
are done
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was done
were done
is done
individuals.
Although
,
this
trend has been changed now and in factory production has been done by various process and all handle by
computer
's. To illustrate with an example, Indian auto manufacturing company Tata replaced all manpower with computers in their factories.
In addition
,
studing
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
student
studding
studying
computers have good chances of future growth for any student. As the world changes drastically, all the work is shifting to
computer
. To exemplify, previously all the data handled by an individual are maintained as physical records, but nowadays these data record work
transfer
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transfers
to computers
such
as excel and word docs.
Thus
, computers become an important subject.
Secondly
, computers gives more accurate data. In the twentieth century, many countries start sending
there
of them or themselves
their
spaceship on the moon and after launching their path depend on various complex calculations which cannot be done by humans. Computers provide more accurate and correct calculation which helps scientist to analysis the path of the rocket.
For example
,
last
year India launch sends a rocket on the moon and uses their
super
a mainframe computer that is one of the most powerful available at a given time
supercomputer
computer
to calculate its path which was impossible by humans To conclude, reading, writing and maths are an essential part of education and for a long time these were only three important subjects in
studies
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the studies
.
Although
, recent years due to various needs
computer
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computers
are
also
added into
this
list due to its accuracy and future growth.
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