Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

Education
and health are two basic things, which are an essential part of every nation.
however
Suggestion
However
,
education
and healthcare are free of charge, which should be funded by the government while It is
also
the responsibilities of the people to pay for these services. In
this
essay, I will discuss both the sides of view with duly argument based on, I will derive a conclusion. On the
first
side,
education
and healthcare should be free of charge and
also
it is responsibilities of government.
First
of all, lots of human beings are living under poverty range who are not able to pay for these basic services.
For instance
, according to serve of times of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
, more than 30% people who are not able to pay for basic thing in
africa
the second largest continent; located to the south of Europe and bordered to the west by the South Atlantic and to the east by the Indian Ocean
Africa
and
also
united nation decided to
succor
assistance in time of difficulty
succour
score
secure
this
country.
Secondly
, it is
also
useful to augment
education rate
Suggestion
the education rate
in the nations.
for
Suggestion
For
example,
germany
a republic in central Europe; split into East Germany and West Germany after World War II and reunited in 1990
Germany
is one of the developed country where rate of
education
more than 90
% which
Accept comma addition
%, which
is highest in all over the worlds.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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