The two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The maps indicate the

road

facilities to a city hospital over 3 years from 2007

till in

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2010.

Overall

,

existing

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parking opportunity has been noticeably extended over

this

period. One change that stands out is that

,

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there has been a significant development. In 2007, there were bus stops on both sides of

the

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Hhospital

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Hospital

Road

and car parking

were

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in

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usage

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of staff and the public in the east.

However

, for accessing the movement of cars and buses, on the west part of the

road

, the area has been separated as a bus station and

also

redeveloping

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car parking constructed to the

eas

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of a city hospital for the public. The car parking of staff

stand

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still as it did in 2007 . Another remarkable thing is that providing

road

access has been possible through roundabouts. The crossing of the three main ways has been

modernisedmodernized

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modernised modernized

and involved in the intercourtintercourse of patients by means of two roundabouts which

also

has

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connected

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to

bus

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station.