In many coutries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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It is true that citizens in today's generation tend to
pefer
like better; value more highly
prefer
an alone life or
ive
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
even
in small family units to a family with many members.
This
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development, I believe, is a mix-blessing and
this
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essay tackles the reasons why. On the one hand, small family units
provides
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provide
several benefits related to the
generation's
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generation
gap.
This
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means that with a small family
units
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unit
, the members can gain their
prvaty
confined to particular persons or groups or providing privacy
private
and reduce the conflicts coming from the differences among generation.
For example
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, the new couples comfortably enjoy their
romatic
belonging to or characteristic of Romanticism or the Romantic Movement in the arts
romantic
airmostphere
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without the parental
surpervior
one who supervises or has charge and direction of
supervisor
. Another noticeable advantage is that the experiencing a life with small family members can provide the freedom and the
own
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ownership
control of daily schedule or diet. Enjoying their own meal or waking up late might not be a dream for the youngsters when they can live alone.
On the other hand
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, there are some reasons why
this
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phenomenon is negative.
This
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can make a contribution to a financial
problems
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problem
to
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for
the citizens. The citizens,
esepically
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
the youngsters, have to deal with the high living cost in the city, while
this
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can be shared in a large family
groups
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group
.
Moreover
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, it is much more
diffcult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
for the public to cope with the emergency. The older, without being taken care of, cannot able to overcome the health
emergency
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emergency, such
such
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as heart
strock
(sports) the act of swinging or striking at a ball with a club or racket or bat or cue or hand
stroke
strokes
or accidents in the house when they choose to live alone. In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, an alone life now becomes more popular than large family groups and
this
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situation, is
equal
Suggestion
equally
negative and positive.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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