In many coutries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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It is true that citizens in today's generation tend to

pefer

like better; value more highly

prefer

an alone life or

ive

inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of

live

even

in small family units to a family with many members.

This

development, I believe, is a mix-blessing and

this

essay tackles the reasons why. On the one hand, small family units

provides

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provide

several benefits related to the

generation's

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generation

gap.

This

means that with a small family

units

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unit

, the members can gain their

prvaty

confined to particular persons or groups or providing privacy

private

and reduce the conflicts coming from the differences among generation.

For example

, the new couples comfortably enjoy their

romatic

belonging to or characteristic of Romanticism or the Romantic Movement in the arts

romantic

airmostphere

without the parental

surpervior

one who supervises or has charge and direction of

supervisor

. Another noticeable advantage is that the experiencing a life with small family members can provide the freedom and the

own

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ownership

control of daily schedule or diet. Enjoying their own meal or waking up late might not be a dream for the youngsters when they can live alone.

On the other hand

, there are some reasons why

this

phenomenon is negative.

This

can make a contribution to a financial

problems

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problem

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for

the citizens. The citizens,

esepically

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

the youngsters, have to deal with the high living cost in the city, while

this

can be shared in a large family

groups

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group

Moreover

, it is much more

diffcult

not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure

difficult

for the public to cope with the emergency. The older, without being taken care of, cannot able to overcome the health

emergency

Accept comma addition

emergency, such

such

as heart

strock

(sports) the act of swinging or striking at a ball with a club or racket or bat or cue or hand

stroke

strokes

or accidents in the house when they choose to live alone. In

conlusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, an alone life now becomes more popular than large family groups and

this

situation, is

equal

Suggestion

equally

negative and positive.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

254 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In many coutries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people say history is one of the most important subjects in schools .other people think that in today’s world subjects science and Technology are more important than history Discuss both this views and give your own opinion

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