You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Proportion
of household Add an article
The proportion
income
five
European Change preposition
in five
countries
spend on food
and drink
, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The table shows the amount of household income
that five
countries
in Europe spend per month on four items. Overall
, it is evident that all five
countries
spend the majority of their income
on food
and drink
and housing, but much less on clothing and entertainment.
Housing is the largest expenditure item for France, Germany and the UK, with all of them spending around one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
of their income
on this
, at 30%, 33% and 37%, respectively. In contrast
, they spend around a quarter on food
and drink
. However
, this
pattern is reversed for Turkey and Spain, who spend around a fifth of their income
on housing, but approximately one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
on food
and drink
.
All five
countries
spend much less on the remaining two items. For clothing, France and Spain spend the least, at less than 10%, while
the other three countries
spend around the same amount, ranging between 11% and 15%. At 19%, Germany spends the most on entertainment, whereas
UK and Turkey spend approximately half this
amount, with France and Spain's
spending between those other three nations.Change noun form
Spain
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